Super, I am always just a tad envious of anyone who can write poetry like this. Well done!
Ahh thanks Anna I must admit, that one nearly stumped me :-)
"pretty gold edges and velvet blood skin"...you painted quite a picture with those words. Nice poem!
Mmm bit grim I know, not sure what came over me, I think I was trying to get across a sinister feeling :-)Thanks
Reckon you did, Andrea. This is brilliant. Inspirational in that, here, she tried so hard to resist, knowing the consequences. But tragic in that we all know that she ultimately failed. Really good. And your last weeks xbox poem too, with the same rhythm ;D
Great take on the prompt Andrea! Very sinister and broody :D
this is wonderfully rich and begs to be read slowly and carefully. Thoroughly enjoyed this!
The meter on this was expertly consistent. Enjoyed this, worth reading a few times over.
Wow I can't believe all the kind comments I've had this week, thank you all so much :-)
ooh very sinister. Great take on the prompt.
Very clever, beautifully balanced and with a great rhythm to the sentence structure. Enjoyed this.
Creepy and wonderful and lyrical, I really loved this.